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50 Shades Of Shane - Comments
Really good! So well written and a great take on the story. You are doing an excellent job writing Shane-he is really complex. Can't wait for more.
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This is so well written and interesting. Shane is such a great character. He is loving and intelligent. I honestly felt bad for him when Rick came back. He took away the woman he loved and just took over as leader, which was Shane's position. I also like how you don't totally bash Lori. I know she probably shouldn't have slept with Shane, but she is just a human who makes mistakes like all of us. It was about two-weeks to a month when they slept together since she thought Rick was dead and she just needed someone. Although, I totally understand when people don't like Lori. Anyways, you have a great story and I hope you keep writing this fine piece of work!
please update soon
9/17/15