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Maggie's Nightmare

Maggie's Nightmare: Chapter 16 - Part One

As always, thank you to everyone who is reading and following this story ... I appreciate it.
And, a Special Thank you to Pepper90, Dixon's Vixen, daniilovesyyou, and The Undead for commenting on the last chapter - you all seriously rock! I love you all!

Now, back to our story ...



Intro (end of Chapter 14 – part 2): "Maggie's Capture"

The men in the vehicle began to yell "Let's get out of here!"

I could feel the vehicle speed off and I could hear it peel out as it kicked up rocks and gravel. A linen cloth was then pulled tight over my eyes, but I could still hear her screaming. Then, I heard Glenn's voice in the distance; he was screaming my name.

Daryl was screaming for Beth.

My heart beat thumped loudly in my ear.

What was going on?

My breath became short and shallow.

It was all such a blur … how did this happen?

I started to feel dizzy and felt myself start to go … everything went to black and I passed out.


Maggie's POV –

I heard voices …

"What the fuck was that?"

"He's gonna be pissed."

"Trust me. He'll thank me."

I heard voices as I started to wake up …

After I passed out, my body must have just slumped over onto the floor of the vehicle. And, as I slowly started regain consciousness; I realized I was still there – they hadn't moved me one inch.

Images started to flash through my head …

Men grabbing me, grabbing Beth; I remembered hearing Glenn's voice, but then everything went dark.

And, I couldn't see anything; I tried to, but the blindfold was still wrapped tightly around eyes.

I really didn't know how long I had been out, but I started to feel a radiating pain in my face that was pressed along the vehicle floor. Small bits of dirt and pebbles ground into my cheek as the constant jostling of the vehicle moved them back and forth across skin and deeper into the flesh of my cheek.

I tried to get up, but when I went to move my arms I felt that they had now been restrained; bound tightly behind my back.

What should I do? Escape? Bargain? Beg?

I tried to think logically …

I tried to start to think of what I was going to do now; how I could escape. What I might say to them to let me go.

I did my best to remain calm, but then I thought of Beth; she'd been shot. I didn't even know where she was or if she was even alive.

"Beth …" I whimpered quietly.

The tears started to flow freely; I couldn't help myself. I began to weep and my cries quickly caught the attention of one my captures.

"Hey. Hey, Martinez … She's up!"

Another voice answered. "I got her." I could feel one of the men grab me from underneath my arms. "Come here." He pulled me onto a bench seat beside him.

"Oww!" I whimpered again as my back slammed into the side of the vehicle behind me.

"Sorry bout that."

He actually sounded sympathetic.

"Feelin' any better? You've been out for a while." The man beside me asked.

I just nodded my head yes. I didn't know what to say.

"Good. He'll be happy to hear that."

That's it; that's all he had to say? And, who is 'he'? I started to get a terrible feeling inside. It was impossible. It couldn't be him … it just couldn't be.

"Who'll be happy?"

One of the men across from me snapped. "Keep your fuckin' mouth shut."

"But, please …"

"I lost several of my friend's out there today. I said keep it shut, or I'll shut it for you."

The man who sat beside me … Martinez? He quickly jumped in.

"Leave her alone, Espy." He paused. "You know Johnny and Greg knew the risks with the mission today. We all did. Now, just calm down."

Martinez turned to me and whispered. "Just keep quiet. Don't make this any harder on yourself, alright?"

I nodded yes, but that still didn't stop the fear that was building inside of me and the millions of questions raced through my head as I tried to wrap my head around what just happened.

They had a mission today … Who were these men?

What did they want?

Was Beth okay?

I couldn't see much from beneath this cloth they had tied over my eyes, but what I could see was that I was in some sort of military vehicle. I sat across from two men, one sat beside me and there were two in the front cab of the vehicle. Five men – I made a mental note of it.

Then, I noticed the guns; big guns that stayed at each man's side. Five men – and they were all heavily armed.

None of the men were speaking now, but I could feel there eyes boring into me. The one across from me, I could sense his intense anger. He lost friends. I guess Glenn, Rick or Daryl was able to kill a few of these bastards before they were able to get away.

We rode for another 20 or 30 minutes, just sitting there in silence.

I just couldn't take any longer; I needed to know what was going on.

"Please … why are you doing this?" I called out to the men who were in the vehicle with me … and no one answered. I could see the man beside me looked over at me fairly annoyed that I hadn't headed his warning, yet he continued to sit there in silence.

"Please … please don't do this. I'm pregnant … please!" I shouted out; hoping someone would respond.

Nothing. It was like I was sitting there by myself. I've never felt so alone in my life. And, I thought of my poor sister; her gun shot wound. I needed to know if she was alright.

"Is she okay? Please … at least tell me if Beth is okay." I pleaded.
Maybe it was the situation, maybe it was the hormones, but I started to sob and became belligerent. I became inconsolable, so much so that I started to frantically struggle against my restraints; trying to free myself.

I tried to stand up when the man beside me grabbed me and pulled me down hard beside him.

"Stop that …We're not going to hurt you, okay?"

I nodded and cried while I spoke.

"Beth? Is …is she okay? Please! She's wounded; tell me if she's okay!"

"Scott … radio Meyers and ask him about the other girl. Apparently, she's wounded. Can you give me an update on her condition?"

"Yes, Sir, Lieutenant."

"Thank you." I quietly whispered.

I could hear the man in the front of the vehicle radio someone.

"The other girl? She's wounded. Can you give me an update on her condition? Over."

Another man's voice came over the radio.

"She's got a gunshot to the leg. We've got a tourniquet on her to stop the bleeding. She's gonna make it, we just got to get her back to base soon and get her stitched up."

I exhaled deeply and quietly mumbled. "Thank God."

I knew a gun shot wound could be fatal, especially, now days. So, I knew she wasn't out of the woods yet, but I was relieved to hear that Beth sounded like she was stable.

We continued to drive and I lost myself in thought. I had to figure out what the hell was going on.

"Where are you taking me?"

"You'll find out soon enough." The across from me curtly replied.

"What's going on? Please tell me."

Martinez turned to me. "I'm sorry; I can't. He'll fill you in when we get there."

There it was again … 'he'll fill you in' …

"Now, please just be quiet. We'll be there soon."

"Where? Where are we going?" I thought to myself.

My stomach churned inside of me as I thought of the worse possible scenario for all of this and who was behind all of this madness …

The Governor …

It's impossible …

We haven't seen or heard from him in … nine months …

It couldn't be – it just couldn't be him!

But, why else would a group abduct me and Beth? Who would be so cruel and calculated? In the back of my head, I knew it was him, but I just couldn't get myself to accept it.

I didn't know what was worse … being taken by The Governor or by another set of armed assailants. Either way, the situation was dire. We'd been abducted by force from our home, our men, our families and our friends, and we didn't know why or for what purposes.

My mind wandered as I thought about all of the incredibly horrible possibilities and the uncertain fate that Beth and I now faced until eventually the vehicle started to slow down and come to a stop.

My body trembled; my hands started to shake.

"Tell The Governor, we're here. Cargo in tow."

My heart sank and I started to sob loudly.

"Oh, God … please, please just let us go … please, I'm begging you …"

The man across from me, Espy, chimed in and patted me on the knee as he opened the back of the vehicle and hopped out.

"Can't do that, sweetheart. He's got plans for you."

This couldn't be happening.

I began to pray in my head. "Not now, please just let this be a nightmare. Let me wake up. If you can hear me God, please let me wake up. Please help me. Help Beth. I beg of you."

Nothing. No response. I could feel it. Beth and I were on our own right now. God may have heard my prayers but he wasn't answering these days.

My head hung low to my chest, my arms still bound behind my back. The light poured in from outside the vehicle, but there was only darkness waiting for me out there. I knew that … and there was nothing I could do.

This was no dream; this was no nightmare.

And, it was real; he was really here - The Governor …

He had waited for his attack, his war, his revenge … Beth and I were just a pieces of the puzzle.
I knew there was more to it, and it made me physically sick to think about it.

I vomited what little I had in my stomach on the floor in front of me.

"Come on out here, sweetheart."

I didn't move.

"Don't make me come in there for you … just come on out now."

I moved towards the light of the back of the vehicle. I could feel the guy they called Espy grab a hold of my arm as he helped me step down out of the vehicle.

And, then I heard his voice … a voice I would never forget; not after what he did.

"Bring her to me."




Poor Maggie; she never catches a break :(

However, this is "Maggie's Nightmare," and this is just the beginning of her troubles.
So, let me know what you think; like it, love it, hate it ... let me know your thoughts. If you've got a moment, please leave me a note or comment on your way out ... I'd love to hear from you all :-D

** I've got Chapter Sixteen - Part Two ready to post ... So, as soon as this chapter get's 5 reviews - I'll post it! I know, I know ... I'm a sucker for comments and reviews. So, it's a bit of a bribe, but I'm hoping to hear from more of you ;-)

Here's a Teaser Chapter Sixteen - Part Two:
The Governor sees Maggie for the first time and he finds out that his men disobeyed his orders and took Beth ... what will he do when he finds out??



oh my goodness. This is good. You have done an amazing job writing this. I am a little sad, I have reached the end and I like it so much. I need to finish it.... Im worried about what will happen. But I am excited

RedneckDaryl16 RedneckDaryl16

oh my goodness. This is good. You have done an amazing job writing this. I am a little sad, I have reached the end and I like it so much. I need to finish it.... Im worried about what will happen. But I am excited

RedneckDaryl16 RedneckDaryl16

This story is really good!!! I read My Guardian and I could not stop. I love Bethyl and Maggie and Glenn. I really hope you add to both stories...... I really cannot stop reading them.

Bethyl333 Bethyl333

This story is amazing! I love the way you're having The Governor be more like he was in the comics... poor Maggie! I also like that while this is mainly about Maggie and The Governor, you've put some Bethyl in there. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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@The Viking

haha thanks:')

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