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Romance in a lost world

Flowers - Part One

Beth's POV :

I opened my eyes propped myself up on one elbow Daryl laid there next to me . It was early in the morning I could see through my quilt that hung from my cell door . I snuck out of bed over Daryl and went to see Carol ans Judith but Judith just sat in her crib quietly , actually thinking about it Carol has been out of herself since Tyrese ...

I collected Judith then whilst walking past the common area I was ambushed by Lizzie , Mika , Molly and Luke . They followed me out to the field skipping and all of them ran ahead began singing ring a ring of rosie but Lizzie stayed by my side then asked "Can I work on the fences with you " .I had thought about it before I didn't want any of them turning like Sofia .

"Yes" . " But first give Judith to Molly and Luke then tell Mika to come too"

She ran with Judith then skipped back to me holding hands with Mika.We walked to the east fences .

"Wait Beth " Maggie had shouted me from the doors Carl and Rick were with her . Carl dart over to see Judith and watch over her . Maggie and Rick were racing toward me and the Girls.

They came neck in neck.

Maggie continued to wander over to the south fence Rick suggested I went with her so I gave Lizzie my hunting knife so Lizzie gave Mika har butterfly knife it was a gift from Carol and Tyrese.

I caught up to maggie and began explaining what was going on with me and Daryl ....

Ricks POV :

As the walkers piled up on the fence I stood back and watched the two knocking the down like skittles .

"Dad look at Judith" carl shouted from the field

I laughed to see my baby girl sat picking flowers in the field then throwing them in the air .

Mika's POV :

I turn to my sister to see how she is doing .

She jams the knife into my stomach .

"Ric-"

3rd Person POV :

Mika fell to the ground her head falling into a bunch of flowers . Lizzie kneels over her saying is can't wait for you to come back and play . Rick turns to see Lizzie over Mika he grabs her in his arms and darts to Hershel in the infirmary . Outside Carl shouts Beth and Maggie to get Lizzie .
Lizzie presses her arm against the fence she gets bit on the wrist she begins to run to Carol finally realising what shes done but shes still smiling .




Notes

#DRAMA

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Comments

Thanks for the advice @SarahBeth this was my first try

Bethyl FTW Bethyl FTW
4/4/14

Okay, after reading another 'chapter', you need to develop your story further and explain everything that's going on. I had trouble following where they story was going from the other chapter to this one and im pretty sure others might as well.

SarahBeth SarahBeth
4/3/14

Your story is okay, you need to clean up your grammar and make sure your dialog flows. Its very choppy at best, smooth it out and take your time. Read what you've written aloud to your self, or even have me do it though email (flymetothemoon1313@yahoo.com).

SarahBeth SarahBeth
4/3/14

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