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The Road To Terminus

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@JustANerdThing48 Yes that made perfect sense. I was thinking of continuing like the show but adding certain parts of my own into the mix. But where she gets kidnapped is changing totally as far as I can tell she gets kidnapped but by someone you would never expect. Also someone has been watching them very closely you will find out who in the next few chapters. I am currently working o0n my other fan fiction story the end of the world along with this also i'm not sure when my next update will be but it will be soon. Thank you for your comment it was very helpful.





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4/13/14

I love your writing style, your descriptions, and I think the dialogue that you wrote (that wasn't in the show) is great and sounds like the characters!
If you don't mind me suggesting though I think it would be good to have your chapters stray away from the episodes in the show just enough so that it's not writng exactly what was in the show. Although I can tell you did at certain parts. (I'm curious what happened to Beth at the end of chapter 4?!) Or if you're going to keep it similar then add more internal thoughts that show us what the characters are thinking that we couldn't see in the show or conversations that they could've had but didn't show in the episodes. (I hope that made sense)
Anyways great story and I'm really excited to see what happens next! :)