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How to survive with a dixon

Run

Come on jasmine i said grabbing stuff and putting it in a bag. We need to get are crap in are bags i grabbed a knife and a energy bar i knew jasmine was still scared from the things coming and eating people jas get your bag we need to leave i said with a scared look ''ok Jasmine said her voice sounded like a lost puppy. What we need to do is run. Run to the woods stay with me at all times. Jasmine looked at me ''Ari are we going to be ok? Yes I said but to tell the truth I didn't know i was scared as much as jasmine was. You got your hammer jas? Yes you got your nife she said back yes you ready I said she knotted OK ready one,two,three! I said as she opened the door running for the woods RUN! JAS! RUN! I yelled looking back at her. Something was in her way and she bummed into it I looked back in front at me there was a big man staring right at me. Putting a gun in my face who are you? The man hissed. I...I... i stuttered. Merle! said a another man with jasmine his hand locked on her wrist Jas I yelled let her go i was yelling the bigger man grabbed my wrist hitting me in the back of my head knocking me out the last thing I heard was Ari said by my best friend.

Notes

Sorry it was short I will get a another one going right now.

Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14