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How to survive with a dixon

right hand man

Merle get up I said shaking him what do you want kid? You need to get up the governor was at the door he wants you to do something. I'll be back I said running in the bathroom the governor gave me a new outfit looks I had a pink T-shirt with jeans and chucks with a grey leopard print jacket. And Merle did not change he kept his normal clothes I ran outside with Merle walking behind me wow look at this place I said yep it nice Merle said. Merle! The governor called out he walked over there I followed him do you want to take the wall! The governor asked him sure he answered jasmine all the kids are in school you need to get there I'm going to school I said yep all the kids do OK I said running to the place that I saw with all the kids. Hi I am your teacher mrs.Tucker hi I am jasmine print I said well miss jasmine if you will follow me. It is a big place I said right in here she said I walked in all eyes were on me umm..hi I'm jasmine print everyone laugh was your mom a printer this boy asked I looked for the teacher but she was not there nice one jack another boy said I walked up to him and punched him in the face blood went everywhere what is going on in here!! Mrs.Tucker asked miss print what happened did you punch jack she asked yes I said come with me she grabbed my arm and took me outside go home she yelled and don't come back I ran to Merle. Merle! I said he looked at me what the.. what are you doing I punch this boy and the teacher kicked me out I said you what! He said you can't do that do you do that to Arianna he said yelling I started to cry. Kid I'm sorry Merle said I ran to our house. Jasmine? Were are you jasmine!! Merle asked I covered my mouth trying not to cry but he found me kid get out from there he said I got myself out from under the bed are you OK he asked going to my level ye.. then there was a knock at the door are you guys OK we are fine Merle called out let's get to bed he said OK I said getting on my bed good night Merle I said night kid

Notes

Sorry it took so long

Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14