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How to survive with a dixon

don't

The blood was rushing up to my head and it hurt like crap I open my eye's and found myself being carried by the man that knocked me out I started to freak out because no one held me since I was young . I heard the man growl don't so I stopped because I didn't know what this man can do. When we got to there camp he put me down and looked at me for a long time it started to scare me. What is your name kid? Arianna parker I said well Arianna I am Merle and that there is my baby brother Daryl he whistled to his brother his whistle made me jump. Daryl this is Arianna Merle said he gave me a small node where is jasmine I asked Daryl looked over to a tree I saw jasmine tied up too. Rilly I asked she went crazy after I knocked you out said Merle what the freak guys I said as I walked over to untie her. Don't yelled Merle she is OK Arianna added Daryl come on let me introduce you to the group trying to calm me down hey guys Daryl yelled this is Arianna he said that is Lori with her son Carl with Shane that's Carol with her daughter sophia and husband Ed that's t-dog Glenn, Dale, Jim, Amy and her sister Andrea than I heard jasmine and I ran to her as fast as I could. I looked at Merle with death eye's when he untied her he said that Daryl and him are looking after us does that mean you are going to be our boss asked jasmine. I guess so merle said as he got up and left us I looked at Daryl his blue eye's told me that it will be ok.

Notes

I hope you guys like this one =)

Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14