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How to survive with a dixon

DIE

OK did you tell him Glenn I asked to hole day OK I did tell him we are going to tell together OK he said. Hey guy I said everyone looked at me I looked at Glenn the barn is full of walkers Shane shot up like a shot. No fuck this I can't take it anymore he said walking to Hershel's house rick ran after him then me then Daryl. Shane stop rick yelled we can talk to Hershel this is his land I whached them going on and on finally I yelled stop you can't keep acting like this you are both acting like assholes Daryl looked at me in shock sorry I said but you need to talk to Hershel I walked away what was that Daryl said i'm sorry but this is my life and you are not my boss I said walking away I saw Shane walking to the barn with rick and Hershel walking to the barn with walker on a leash I think. I ran down Hershel looked like he was going to cry Shane opened the barn walkers came out I grabbed a gun and stared to shoot them Daryl has never seen me like this. I shot 6 walkers I first walkers with a gun they where all gone and one came out of the barn. When it came out I was going to shoot it then I saw it was sophia I drop to the ground soph...no you dead no you can't be fuck you can't sophia I heard carol yell running to her Daryl grabbed her and rick went up and shot her I was crying to hard now I couldn't help it I that that she would be alive why can't she be alive. Arianna Daryl tried to grab me but I ran away to are tent I am going to go get jasmine I will go and get her she will not die never will I let that happen I pack a knife and Daryl guns and bullets and water and 3 cans of I don't know stuff. And I put them in my backpack and went in the woods alone in the dark. You will never destroy me Daryl!

Notes

I am sorry I wanted to try this I love the ending so yah bye

Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14