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How to survive with a dixon

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"I am so bord Merle put me on the wall so I can do something for ones I am bord i can't do anything but sit here and watch nothing yep nothing was here not even a walker. I want you to stay here..blah...blah..blah..I was going to have a good day with jack but no I am stuck by myself on this piece of crap wall this is so stupid I have not had one piece of action.'' You can't come...blah..blah..he never gives me a chance oh...oh a walker oh my god I pick up the gun then I heard a car coming it ran over the walker "NO...I was going to shoot that Merle got put of the car then I saw two new people with them I opened the gate and followed them to see the doctor then when I realized it was Andrea I ran to her asking so many questions. "Arianna is OK she said Daryl is OK to" I could not believe it she was ok my heart was going crazy I looked at the women beside her she looked at me it is not nice to stare she hissed my mouth went open oh no she didn't I said that no one could hear. That is michonne Andrea said looking at Merle we were on the rode all winter Milton walked the governor was right behind him michonne terned to him we want are weapons she hissed " OK she is scary she is not in a good mood that's for shore" Merle terned to me all I heard was I want you to go back on the wall...blah..blah..you can stay..blah..blah..take the gun and..blah..blah..right so go do it and we..blah...blah..blah ok'' OK what did you say I asked he just went crazy. Go to the wall now he yelled I ran as fast I could I tripped on myself self why doing it i sat there hear we go again then michonne walked up and sat next to me asking me ever ying she even said she was sorry for snapping the sat there for a while and got to no one other and we started to become friends which I thought was nice I need to have someone nice then jack for once. Then I saw a walker oh..oh..I looked for cars I had this it was mine then it went down not by my gun by Martinez who had a smile ear to ear are you joking I was going to get that one got down with michonne" I was going to get that one.''

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so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14