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How to survive with a dixon

rules that are broken


"How could she do this to me"I swung my machete in anger it made a dent in a tree I walked further and further in the woods trying not to let tears fall my face felt hot with anger "who cares about my dad...because I don't and I never will what he did to me is a memory that still comes back to me" I stopped and started to walk back. I felt calm now when I reached the camp everyone looked at me but didn't say anything I sat down and looked at the fire I put my machete in my belt and took out my knife and laid down on a small blanket jasmine and jack were asleep holding hands and Daryl was asleep and Merle was still up just staring at me. I closed my eyes but I could feel him looking at me then all of the sudden I fell asleep. "Arianna...Arianna get up" I look up at Daryl I looked over at jas and jack who were still holding hands. Daryl pulled me up in a slick movement he patted my back "let's go on a walk" and he started to walk and I followed quickly I looked at the ground while I walked I saw something on the ground it was a gun that was fully loaded I picked it up and put it in my bag then Daryl stopped "about last night" I looked down I knew what he was going to say but he didn't say anything but that he was sorry I looked over and I saw Merle, jack and jasmine " thanks for leaving us'' Merle said looking at me I rolled my eyes and looked at jack and jas I pulled there hands apart "there we go" I smiled "OK there are some rules about this NO HOLDING HANDS!!! And don't kiss its weird OK and please don't say I love you it bothers me OK and....oh no sleeping together...well OK you can do that but don't do anything" I knew jasmine now hatted my guts but I had to say this its just what I haft to do.

We walked for a good hour and jack and jasmine were chatting away Merle and Daryl were arguing about what is better staying in a tree or staying in a house. Which was a really stupid argument well I would go with Daryl house has better stuff like food, water, bullets, guns or knifes which is a good thing to have. But I look back at jasmine and jack and I saw them kiss I felt like I was going to throw up I grabbed my mouth I haven't seen anything so weird in my life.

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Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14