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How to survive with a dixon

Anger

I can't believe he's gone what all we been throw and he gets himself killed like Daryl said (no one can kill Merle but merle) I looked at Arianna who was sitting down tapping the floor I looked at jack he's just changed I see it he looked so mad all the time. "Life is going to be different were going to be OK" I put my hand on Arianna's shoulder jack made a loud breath we both looked at him he walked over to us "you will see him again" he said in a snotty way my anger came in my body I jumped up and put my gun to his head "say that to my face I dare you....you pig" "jasmine stop now" Arianna yelled I looked back at her I looked at Jack I gave him these eyes that Merle and Daryl did when there mad I back handed him with all my strength he yelp and grabbed his face he ran I smiled I was proud of myself I looked at Ari she was smiling that was a good thing. Andrea came two days ago I was in my cell I didnt want to see her but I talked to her she was coming back today I went to my cell jack was out side I got on my bed I took out my Journal and before I could start to write Arianna ran in with two walkie talkies in her hands she gave one to me she could be a child sometimes but that's why I'm older then her she ran to her cell "jasmine can you hear me " I pushed a button on the side of the walkie "yeah...you know I was doing something" she laughed and told me to keep it with me at all times I put it in my belt by my knife I took out my gun and looked at it and put it on my bed I fell asleep.

(Dream) i walk throw the woods Arianna was missing I walked by the prison I saw on Arianna on the ground she was crying I walked to her Daryl was on the grownd he was dead I saw something in the corner of my eye something was walking to me it was jack holding his arm he was bit my dad came out behind him"Jasmine its daddy" I started to cry I ran to him then he was a walker he bit me on my shoulder. (End of dream) I was crying I forgot about my dad how much misses him how much I loved him.

Notes

Hope you like it :) :)

Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14