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How to survive with a dixon

new start

I sat there looking at merles dog tag I let out a loud sigh and put the dog tag under my shirt I walked out of my cell I looked down and everyone was packing there stuff. "Rick! What are you doing" Daryl looked up "get your stuff together" I went back in my cell and pulled a bag from under my bed and started packing. When I got all my stuff I got up and something fell it was a hat with a bow I pick it up and poot it on I waled out I saw jasmine "jasmine! What are we doing'' she shrugged her shoulders and walked out. I walked out beth came up to me and grabbed my stuff and put it in the back of the car I looked around for an answer then it hit me the governor is coming. "Nice hat" I turned around it was Hershel he was smiling at me "umm...thanks I found it" he put his hand on my shoulder he pulled something out of his bag it was a Bible. He put it in my hand I was never religious I looked up at him "read it" he ordered I knotted and smiled he walked away I opened the book it was big it had a black cover and golden letters on the front. I opened it to the first page and started to read "what are you reading" at first I thought it was jasmine but the voice was deeper then terms it was jack of all people I closed the book and held it closely to his face I didn't like him vary much he was a brat jasmine didn't think so. "Its a bible common sense boy!'' I walked away god I did not like that boy not one bit. Carl ran up to me "your comming with me,Hershel,beth and judy i was confused ''what about jack and jas'' he looked over at michonne "there going in the woods with michonne'' i knotted my head ''ok...ok sounds good'' we all got in a car we got in the woods I started to hear gunshots ''I should be there" I looked over at Carl "stop! They got it'' it was 20 minutes later I hearted the sound of someone running it was a kid probably 16 or 17 we all pulled out our guns he stopped and looked at us. "OK its OK all you need to do is give me the gun and you won't get hurt'' I tryed to be as soft as I could be "hand over the gun son" he looked at me "sure here" I went to grab the gun and Carl shot the gun and he went down. ''Oh my god Carl'' he looked at me he was happy with what he did "you didn't need to do that you know" he was still smiling we got back in the car and started for the prison we got there and I got out of the car before I new it Daryl grabbed me I jumped and looked at him. "Were going to woodbury do you want to go jasmine is going" I smiled "yeah I'll come with ya" we got in the car and rick was driving Daryl was in the set next to him I was in the middle michonne was by the window I didn't understand that then jas was beside me. We were half way there and there 4 cars and body's everywhere we all got out I looked at one car a girl came to the window I jumped back ''

"Umm....Daryl" they came over to the car and they opened the door she told us that the governor shot and killed everyone I was shocked we walked to woodbury we got there they were shooting at us the girl shot up ''Tyrese don't shoot" rick pulled her down "Karen are you OK" we all came out "they saved me" we walked to the gates we went in and I looked at them I gave them a small wave. We started for the place that Jasmine was we walked down there "the governor kept people down here" we opened the door it was Andrea "oh my god" I ran in with michonne he looked at all of us she looked at rick ''give me your gun let me do it while I still can'' he gave her the gun I was trying not to cry I looked at jasmine "I'm trying not to cry" she was balling tears she was trying to stop them then I joined I started tears ran down my face. We all walked out except michonne we stood there for a good minute and then we heard the gunshot. Michonne came out we put all the people on a bus and they came back with us to the prison we got there there where 50 people and
they all got settled in cell block D and A we got a new start to do something new

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Comments

so i don`t really know what to write it`s hard sometimes but i think i`m doing a good job at it with merle it`s hard to have him say things daryl idk i think hes fine but jack his hard to write about but thats not why i am writing this i just wanted to say thank you for reading my story you guys are the reason i write everyday i know that my story is not the best and no what i thought it would be. but i think about stoping but i thought bout you guys who read my story i can`t leave you hanging so thank you =)

dixon kid dixon kid
1/18/15

shit

askrickgrimes askrickgrimes
1/16/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

I agree with sevenvoyager, it is very confusing to read. I honestly don't even know what is happening in this story as it is very hard on the eyes to follow. Hopefully you take what i say in a positive way!! :)
●You need to paragraph your chapter.

● "Have conversations in clear sections!" so we can see who is saying what :)

●Read over it before you submit it. Check spellings and how the chapter visually looks to read. People will lose interest very quickly if its not easy to read.

Keep it up, and stick to your passion!! :D xx

Spykes_Dixon Spykes_Dixon
1/2/15

@sevenvoyager
Thanks I will try my best

dixon kid dixon kid
12/13/14