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Barbarians

Summary

It's been about three months since Rick and Carl died and Daryl had become the leader. In this story they meet a community called Barbarians and Carol notices a girl who looks like Sophia. The girl is Sophia, but she has changed.

Characters

Alice

Alice

Community: Barbarians Position: Fighter

Alpha

Alpha

Community: Whisperers Position: Fighter and leader Family: Husband (unknown, dead) Lydia (daughter, still alive)

Beta

Beta

Community: Whisperers Position: Fighter

Carol

Carol

Community: Survivors Position: Fighter / Daryl's right hand woman

Carter

Carter

Community: Outsiders Position: Fighter

Charlotte

Charlotte

Community: Whisperers Position: Fighter

Dakota

Dakota

Community: Outsiders Position: Fighter

Daryl

Daryl

Community: Survivors Position: Fighter / leader

Emma

Emma

Community: Whisperers Position: Fighter

Ethan

Ethan

Community: Whisperers Position: Fighter

Eugene

Eugene

Community: Survivors Position: Scientist / Fighter

Gabriel

Gabriel

Community: Survivors Position: priest / fighter

Glenn

Glenn

Community: Survivors Position: Fighter

Indigo

Indigo

Community: Barbarians Position: Fighter / leader

Jenny

Jenny

Community: Survivors Position: Fighter

Jesus

Jesus

Position: Fighter Community: Currently not a member of the community. Former Hiltop / Survivor Member

Joshua

Joshua

Community: Outsiders Position: Fighter

Judith

Judith

Community: Survivors Position: Fighter

Lucy

Lucy

Community: Barbarians Position: Fighter

Luke

Luke

Community: Outsiders Position: Fighter

Chapters

  1. Chapter 1

    In this chapter, Survivors will find the sign saying "We are barbarians" they walk forward and they arrive at the gate.

  2. Chapter 2

    In this chapter, Jesus, Tara, Maggie and Olivia return. They collide with each other in the woods and they do not know that Rick and Carl are dead, so they go to the Survivors' camp and find out it's empty. And they see Rick and Carl, but they have become walkers.

  3. Chapter 3

    In this chapter, Jesus, Tara, Olivia and Maggie collide with the community called Outsiders as they are looking for the remaining survivors.

  4. Chapter 4

    In this chapter, Jesus tells others what Magna told them.

  5. Chapter 5

    Merle is trying to convince others that they should face The Whisperers. But others refuse the idea. And Merle does not like it, so he leaves alone to look for The Whisperers despite warnings.

  6. Chapter 6

    In this chapter Merle meets Whisperers and Daryl finds Judith and Carol and Daryl asks the big question and Judith doesn't know how to respond.

  7. Chapter 7

    In this chapter Merle returns to the camp, but he is not alone.

  8. Chapter 8

    This chapter Merle and Lydia are put in cell to wait for the judgment. Beta tries to get Charlotte to stop cooking. but Charlotte refuses because Beta refuses to take the mask away.

  9. Chapter 9

    In this chapter Judith tries to negotiate with Indigo. And Indigo agrees to Judith's offer and he will release Merle, but she will not release Lydia, yet.

  10. Chapter 10

    Judith and others are preparing to face the Whisperers, even though Lydia is trying to get them to give up the idea, but it's useless.

  11. Chapter 11

    In this chapter, the situation escalates to the point where the Beta gets nervous and kills Emma, in front of others, because Emma claims that he would have helped Charlotte escape and in the meantime Charlotte arrives in the Barbarian community.

  12. Chapter 12

  13. Chapter 13

    In this chapter Alpha reveals how they found the Barbarian community and the answer gets everyone to get angry with Merle.

  14. Chapter 14

    In this chapter Jenny go to look for Merle. She is shocked when she finds Merle headless body and sees Merle head cut off and someone has put it on a spike. She runs back to the camp to tell others what she saw.

  15. Chapter 15

    In this chapter, Beta finds Lydia and Charlotte from the abandoned and deserted cottage in the middle of the farm.

  16. Chapter 16

    In this chapter, others are preparing to fight against the Whisperers, and the Whisperers find Lydia and Charlotte. And Charlotte gets angry with Beta.

  17. Chapter 17 (last chapter)

    In this chapter, Judith and others find the Whisperers and they surround them. And Beta goes back to the farm because he wants to talk to with Charlotte, but Charlotte disagrees with Beta and as a result she shoots Beta. And the Whisperers will come to an end when Judith and others kill them and Cha

Comments

@twdfanatic92
I wouldn't recoment google translator. English is not my main language either. I use Online Text Correction. It's much better than Google Translator. :D

invisible_smoke invisible_smoke
12/1/18

@invisible_smoke Well, this sounds like stupid, but I usually use Google Translator to help. Because English is not my strongest language and it is not my main language. I speak Finnish, so I usually first write to Finnish and then i translate them into English so translations can sometimes be wrong.

twdfanatic92 twdfanatic92
11/30/18

Okay, it's good to a point. There is little mistakes with the writing. Little stumbles here and there. (I'm not the master but there is just something that bothers even me). Like Ch1 Merle says ''I maybe, baby'', I think it would be better just ''Maybe, baby'', but that's just me.. so don't bother it too much. And in ch1 Merle says ''Good day,miss, I'm Merle'', to me it just not Merle. He would say something more...well Merle. From Judith is hard to say what she would really say, so I like your Judith as she is. Pay attencion to she/he! I know I've have sruggled with that one because English is not my native language. There was one in the ch2. I wait what comes next. Keep writing, it gets better more you do it. Love it. And don't offend of my trying of helping you. I hope someone would do it to me too… Keep writing champ :D

invisible_smoke invisible_smoke
11/29/18