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Barbarians

Chapter 15

Meanwhile, in a farm abandoned and deserted cottage.
Lydia "Are you sure they won't find us here?"
Charlotte "Hey, we're in the middle of nowhere in an abandoned and deserted cottage. They hardly find us."
Lydia "Hope they can't find us."
Charlotte "Hey, believe me. They can't find us here."
Lydia "If you found this place they will find it too."
Charlotte "They can't find this place because I haven't told anyone about this place."
Lydia "How did you find this place, anyway?"
Charlotte "It's a long story."
Lydia "I'm going to sleep."
Charlotte "Just go. I watch."
Lydia "You just said nobody could find us."
Charlotte "Someone has to keep track of the walkers."
Lydia "Yeah, I forgot about it."
Charlotte "Just go to bed."
Lydia "Okay. Good night, Charlotte."
Charlotte "Good night and sleep well."
Lydia "I'm trying."
Then Lydia went to lie down on the mattress that was on the floor.
Charlotte "I'll wake you up if I see something suspicious."
Lydia "Okay, Mom."
Charlotte looked at Lyd, but she didn't say anything.
Lydia "Good Night, Mother."
Charlotte "Good night, Lydia."
Then Lydia fell asleep and Charlotte went out and she closed the door of the cottage quietly and she sat down the stairs.
Charlotte "I wish Lysia was my daughter."
Then she saw the movement close to the cottage and she got up in a flash.
Charlotte "Who's there?"
Nobody answered anything.
Charlotte "I don't think twice to push the trigger."
Nobody still answered.
Charlotte "Did you hear what the hell I said?"
Then Beta came out from behind the tree.
Charlotte "Beta, what the hell are you doing here? And how the hell did you know we're here? And did Alpha send you?"
Beta "Press brake, sister."
Charlotte "Answer me, hell."
Beta "I came looking for you. And I just knew you were here, and no, no Alpha have sent me. And she did not even know that I'm here, no one knows."
Charlotte just stared at Beta and aimed at Beta.
Beta "Hey, you don't need that. I haven't come here to kill you."
Charlotte "As I believe the shit you say."
Beta didn't answer anything.
Charlotte "Why did you even come?"
Charlotte was still aiming for Beta.
Beta "Merle is dead."
Charlotte "That wasn't new. It's normal what you do."
Beta "I wouldn't have wanted to do it. But Alpha told me to do it."
Charlotte said nothing.
Beta "Where's Lydia?"
Charlotte "She's inside and she sleeps."
Beta "Okay."
Charlotte "Get out before I shoot you."
Beta "You don't want to do it. Otherwise Lydia would wake up."
Charlotte "Lydia called me a mother."
Beta "That's what you are."
Charlotte "But I'm not Lydia's mom. Alpha is."
Beta "Lydia would like you to be. And to be honest, I also hope, too."
Charlotte "Get out yet when you can."
Beta "You're not shooting me. I know you."
Charlotte "You don't know a shit about me."
Beta didn't say anything.
Charlotte "If you don't leave now, I'll shoot you and I mean it!"
Beta "Listen, I didn't come here to kill you, I came here to help you."
Charlotte "That's an excuse, isn't it?"
Beta "No, it's not! I'm serious!"
Charlotte "I still don't believe shit what you say!"
Beta "I would never want to hurt you or Lydia!"
Charlotte said nothing.
Beta "Charlotte, let me help you."
Charlotte "We don't need your help. Now go."
Beta "Charlotte, I know you need help."
Charlotte, "I do not need help. I can handle it. I've survived this far, and no one helped me."
Beta didn't say anything.
Charlotte "Go now before Lydia wakes up and sees you."
Beta "You know where to find me if you change your mind."
Then Beta turned around and he walked away.
Charlotte "Damn, he was stubborn."
Charlotte hadn't noticed Lydia who had come out.
Lydia "What did Beta do here?"
Charlotte turned around and looked at Lydia.
Charlotte "Did you hear everything?"
Lydia "Not everything. Perhaps half."
Charlotte said nothing.
Lydia "How in the hell did Beta find us?"
Charlotte "I don't know."
Lydia "Now everyone knows where we are!"
Charlotte "They don't know. We're leaving right in the morning!"
Lydia "Okay."
Charlotte "Go back to sleep."
Lydia didn't say anything, she just went back to sleep.
Charlotte "I'll kill Beta if she tells everyone where we are."
In the meantime, on the other hand.
Judith "We all have to fight together. We don't win the whisperers otherwise."
Magna "The whisperers are stronger than us."
Sophia "They are not, if we all join forces."
Indigo "I have to agree with Sophia."
Judith "We are attacking tonight."
Magna "Are you crazy?"
Daryl "Those crazy killed my brother!"
Magna said nothing.
Daryl "And we'll kill them tonight or someone else will die!"
Nobody said anything.
Carter "I'm going to collect all the weapons we have."
Indigo "Okay."
Carter went to collect weapons.
Gabriel "You have indeed come to your father, Judith."
Judith "Somebody has to keep this crap together."

to be continued....

Notes

Comments

@twdfanatic92
I wouldn't recoment google translator. English is not my main language either. I use Online Text Correction. It's much better than Google Translator. :D

invisible_smoke invisible_smoke
12/1/18

@invisible_smoke Well, this sounds like stupid, but I usually use Google Translator to help. Because English is not my strongest language and it is not my main language. I speak Finnish, so I usually first write to Finnish and then i translate them into English so translations can sometimes be wrong.

twdfanatic92 twdfanatic92
11/30/18

Okay, it's good to a point. There is little mistakes with the writing. Little stumbles here and there. (I'm not the master but there is just something that bothers even me). Like Ch1 Merle says ''I maybe, baby'', I think it would be better just ''Maybe, baby'', but that's just me.. so don't bother it too much. And in ch1 Merle says ''Good day,miss, I'm Merle'', to me it just not Merle. He would say something more...well Merle. From Judith is hard to say what she would really say, so I like your Judith as she is. Pay attencion to she/he! I know I've have sruggled with that one because English is not my native language. There was one in the ch2. I wait what comes next. Keep writing, it gets better more you do it. Love it. And don't offend of my trying of helping you. I hope someone would do it to me too… Keep writing champ :D

invisible_smoke invisible_smoke
11/29/18